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2010-06-11 08:28 pm (UTC)
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Just spotted a few more typos:
"Thomas isn't half bad looking beside; "
besides?
"just angling for plausibly deniability"
just plausible, I think?
"choked off cry has he spills"
as he spills, I'm assuming.
Also,
"moving, finally do do up his flies"
to do up, also, unless he has multiple zippers, I would think just his fly?
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"Thomas isn't half bad looking beside; "
besides?
"just angling for plausibly deniability"
just plausible, I think?
"choked off cry has he spills"
as he spills, I'm assuming.
Also,
"moving, finally do do up his flies"
to do up, also, unless he has multiple zippers, I would think just his fly?