Wow. This is... well, I don't really have words for it. Melancholic, maybe? It's certainly lovely and you nailed the characters spot on (I can almost hear Jude Law reading this, in that condescendingly elite - and broken - way).

I enjoy the idea of creating perfect things, and having them break. Like you said, Jerome is interested in himself.

Now I really want to watch Gattaca. I need to find that dvd...