I'm not entirely happy with it, I never managed to quite navigate the language and tone of it the way I wanted to, but I think it's sort of amusing as an excercise in anxiety and general loathing of Los Angeles.
Excellent and wonderful! As for LA, it's a city with many faces, some of them being wholly unexpected. That story perfectly reflects one face, but it's not all like that. OTOH, almost all of the city's faces are traps for those who look at them.
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Date: 2003-11-23 12:45 pm (UTC)