I think you have that down to a t, because the sparseness of words is what struck me about the third scene. I mean, you have so much going on there, both in terms of plot as well as emotion, and you need so few words to say it. You go through it really quickly, and you don't need to say more, but it felt like a story all in itself.
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Date: 2010-06-06 10:05 pm (UTC)