Oh, there are a lot of lines very nice here (fiery hotness, too, of course). It's interesting at the end how the narrator POV shifts to Jack and that works since he's observing more of the action than Ianto. Sort of a reversal from beginning to end such that the reader witnesses both perspectives.
This line is great: The only reason he's not angry is because he thinks this is probably how he's supposed to feel.
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Date: 2010-06-11 08:25 pm (UTC)This line is great: The only reason he's not angry is because he thinks this is probably how he's supposed to feel.