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[rm]

Just came back from an excessively lovely barn dance experience with wordsofastory. Ran into someone from high school (more on that later), and a creepy dude in leather trying to evoke some sort of poetic fantasy but in lacking a poet's shirt was wearing just a crappy white work shirt with his trying too hard ensemble. I still would have felt kindly towards him had he not been inappropriately grabby with me and everyone.

But it was as always inspirational. Although next time we must not go for Mexican foos first. My hair smells like fajitas.

I'm all exhilirated-y and covered in plot bunnies.

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[wordsofastory.livejournal.com]

*grins* Yes, I like that. And it makes as much sense than any other first-time situation I can come up with for the two of them, which is something that continues to drive me crazy.

Oh, come on. There's no such thing as too porny.

[rm.livejournal.com]

Kissing her was nice. And then, when Alec ran his hands down his sides, and over his ass and thighs and then pressed against him -- well, them, really -- it was far nicer. Although, jusdging by his friend's huff of breath and the sudden sharpness with which those fingers dug into Richard's flesh, maybe Alec wasn't quite understanding the extent to which he was teh cause. No matter though, not really, because this, this felt good too.

[wordsofastory.livejournal.com]

Mmmmm, yum.

[rm.livejournal.com]

And this is, in my mind, still in public at wherever they are. It's just making any of it work.

[wordsofastory.livejournal.com]

Yeah, there's so many nice scenes and images for this story, it's just trying to fit it all together into a plot that makes sense that I'm having trouble with. I wonder if there isn't something funky you could do with the format- like do a series of brief snapshots- to skip over the hard parts, and not have to write them.

[rm.livejournal.com]

I'm sure there is, which would only lead to this conversation taking place after the story, instead of before it, however. Heh.